Sujet de la discussionPosté le 24/07/2004 à 19:44:53Donnez votre avis sur mes compos
Celles ci son sur une mélodie assez blues
Her
When I saw her, I didn't expected it
But she's as burn as the sun
She's always acting stupid
But it's only to hold on the gun
Somewhere secret, secretly she cry's
A dream of something perfect simply a lie
Somewhere secret, secretly she cry's
A dream of something perfect simply a lie
In the morning, already yelling
She can't sleep but sure she can cry
Why am I born that’s what she's asking
Then she goes out and watch out the sky
Somewhere secret, secretly she cry's
A dream of something perfect simply a lie
Somewhere secret, secretly she cry's
A dream of something perfect simply a lie
She's so friendly, but is she really
For her life is like playing a game
A game of pain, a really nasty
To be in life or dead for her it's the same
Somewhere secret, secretly she cry's
A dream of something perfect simply a lie
Somewhere secret, secretly she cry's
A dream of something perfect simply a lie
et pis ya celle là
Secret
I can't figure out your mystery
Why does everybody count on me
Well it's a secret
Locked inside
a wallet
Hidden deep
In a basket
Secretly kept
In a pocket
If you find it
You can get it
I wont let you go so fast baby
Why do you have to scream so loud lady
No matter how hard I search
All I find in you are dead leaves and dirt
Sympathy with devil could be useful indeed
Hundred of thousand angels falling evil for what I need
I can't figure out your memories
Why does everybody always count on me
I saw your bruised heart Ask to your beautiful body
Not to take part To the thing that appeals me so heavily
Your only way to salvation my dear
Is to wash up your brain with your pain and ask the one who has no fear
Toutes les EQ sont a refaire nom de dieu:
*voix: boost de +3 à 6K et coupe tout en dessous de 100.
*basse: coupe à 80, boost +3 à 15K
*guitare: refais la prise
*parole: idem